Heart of Oak - English Sonnet ~Awarded by Sasha~
Old tree with wrinkled trunk and furrowed arms I am the ghost of summers past and love To linger long within your golden charms And stir your crown of glory high above Whi...Read More
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This one had been to several sonnet centrals with their seal of approval in the original version, then I decided to make a few changes... which I shouldn't have done.Anyway I have now got it back more...
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Right, I think I've nailed it, exchanged "circumstance" for "demise" and believe that works. Thank you for bearing with me. By the way I would like to add that I have always been open to any...
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Thanks to Sasha , think I'm done now and it's back to its former self. Wish I had never started tampering with the original text, you tend to get stuck in a rut then, and sonnets can be tricky. We...
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So pleased that you have it as you want it KatrionaTis nigh impossible for me to alter once writtenOnly God can make a tree as the saying goesbut you surely have enhanced this oneLove what you do
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cusick wrote: So pleased that you have it as you want it KatrionaTis nigh impossible for me to alter once writtenOnly God can make a tree as the saying goesbut you surely have enhanced this oneLove...
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You have really done a beautiful job with this. I did not see it in it's original form and just as well....I love the flow but more than thatI love the sentiment of your soul laid bare before those...
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A lovely sonnet holding a clear message. Trees watch the brief lives of humans over the centuries I onder what they think about our frenetic activities
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Topper5779 wrote: You have really done a beautiful job with this. I did not see it in it's original form and just as well....I love the flow but more than thatI love the sentiment of your soul laid...
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poeticpiers wrote: A lovely sonnet holding a clear message. Trees watch the brief lives of humans over the centuries I onder what they think about our frenetic activitiesTheir opinion of us ? Can't...
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~ dear Kat, this Sonnet is not only picture perfectbut your grace and eloquence makes this piecea joy to read...perfect rhyme & meter, and I love the IambicsI know how it feels to lose a whole...
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~ it is my pleasure to award this gorgeous Sonnet, dear Katyou capture the beautiful of nature and the changing seasonsto perfection in this piece...this one speaks to me...soul deep Sash xx
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Angel of Shadow wrote: ~ dear Kat, this Sonnet is not only picture perfectbut your grace and eloquence makes this piecea joy to read...perfect rhyme & meter, and I love the IambicsI know how it...
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